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Mike's Drawing Night 2 by ~BrokenFantasy:iconBrokenFantasy:

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©2009 ~BrokenFantasy
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This is for :iconmichaelcrichlow:'s Drawing Night he has going on. I wasn't able to do the last one he did because of cold, at least I can do this one since I'm feeling a bit better.

The journal entry is here: [link]

This is the first drawing since I did the Ahsoka sketch which was a good 2 or 3 months ago. Had a bit of trouble with the face. As well as the hands. But like I said, first sketch in a while. Came out pretty decent with a few touch ups from Photostudio to remove some smudges.

Done completely with a F pencil.

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:iconjam-bad:
~jam-bad Jan 17, 2009, 9:57:20 PM
nice work with the pose ^_^,the arm looks a bit long though.

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:iconcat-girl-aholic:
~Cat-girl-aholic Jan 18, 2009, 11:38:30 AM
You seem to have a good understanding of the basic forms and shapes in the pose, though the proportions and composition of the figure are not right. Her whole figure seems to be a bit compressed and doesn't flow (from head-to-torso-hips-legs) naturally. I think the main source of that is the angle of her neck and the way it connects with her shoulders. Exercises like this are great practice though - keep at it!

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:iconbrokenfantasy:
~BrokenFantasy Jan 18, 2009, 5:43:12 PM
yeah, though i'm just a bit rusty from the lack of drawing. That and I was just having a horrible day with my sketch. Still it came out better then the first. And thanks.

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~BrokenFantasy Jan 18, 2009, 5:46:48 PM
Basic forms and poses are easy to understand but when you actually do it, sometimes it just doesn't always work for you. I think the head from the start just blow the proportions out in the first place. I was more focus on the form and pose that proportion just went in one eyes and out the other. But yeah, I agree, it is great practice. Which is why I did it.

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You have to have fun with art! That's the only way it'll work for you!
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:iconaxl122:
*Axl122 Jan 19, 2009, 2:06:33 AM
Nice one. I like the way you drew her face.

The pose is good and the curves are here. The only thing may be her left arm which is a bit to long.
:iconbrokenfantasy:
~BrokenFantasy Jan 19, 2009, 9:52:45 AM
Thanks.

Yeah, After it was pointed out I noticed it was a bit long. Maybe the angle of the arm threw off the length or something.

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You have to have fun with art! That's the only way it'll work for you!
:excited: :fingerscrossed: :excited:
:iconstinethekitty:
~StineTheKitty Jan 20, 2009, 12:25:29 PM
I always have problems with faces and hands. I think that you did a great job! You keep improving. :)
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~BrokenFantasy Jan 20, 2009, 6:50:00 PM
Thank you. I still don't know why hands are so hard for me. I just don't know. It's strange.

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